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Commercial proposal: template and tips for creating

21.05.2025 18:04
Natalia Mitroshina
Natalia Mitroshina

Author and content analyst on trade automation

Commercial offer

It is extremely important for any business to have its own "business card" that will represent the company in the best possible way and at the same time motivate partners to accept your "terms of the game." 

Such a presentation is a commercial offer. It is an important tool that allows you to attract new customers and establish strong relationships with partners. 

A well-written proposal can significantly increase your chances of closing a successful deal, selling goods, or getting an order for manufacturing products. In this article, we'll look at the structure or sample of a commercial proposal and provide some tips for creating one.

What is a commercial offer?

A commercial proposal is a document that a company creates for a potential client or partner to offer them goods or services. It contains a description of the advantages, product functionality, and benefits of cooperation. 

The purpose of the letter of introduction is to interest the recipient in cooperation and convince them that your company is the best able to meet their needs. 

Most often, CPs are used by b2b businesses: manufacturing, services, such as car services, consulting, auditing, marketing agencies, cleaning companies, and all kinds of intermediaries. 

There is a distinction between a cold and a hot offer. In the first case, the recipient hasn't heard anything about your company yet, so you need to get them interested in cooperation and persuade them to continue negotiations. 

In the second case, the partner is already "warmed up" and doesn't need to list your advantages in detail once again, all that's left is to convince them to cooperate with you.

Requirements for the preparation of the CP

A commercial proposal has a clearly defined structure that includes a title (introduction), a description of the product or problem, solutions, benefits, terms of cooperation, and a call to action.

The offer should be tailored to a specific client or partner, taking into account their needs, desires, and capabilities. 

It is important that the information in the document is presented as clearly and concisely as possible, without errors. The proposal should clearly demonstrate how your product or service will solve the client's specific problems. 

Structure of the commercial offer

  1. Caption

The subject line is the first thing the recipient reads about your company. So write it in a way that reflects the value, urgency, and importance of the email at the same time. Include the name of your company so that the client understands who the offer is from. 

  1. Intro

The introduction of the email should include a brief overview of your company, the purpose of the email, and a general description of your product or service. The lead should encourage you to read on. 

  1. Analysis of customer needs

In this part, describe the customer's problem or needs and explain how your product and offer will help to meet them. Emphasize how working with you will solve the partner's problem. 

  1. Offer

Describe the details of cooperation and list all the benefits of your product or service. Offer specific solutions, support them with graphs, figures, and calculations. This will inspire more trust in you as a reliable partner. 

For example, in the Torgsoft accounting program, you can generate various types of financial reports to analyze and review the results of the store's work: sales, expenses, inventory, settlements with partners, etc. They will help the owner to determine the amount of cost of sales, discounts, average margin on goods, turnover, profit, profitability, and more.

Screenshot of "Gross income"

Screenshots from the program will clearly show partners what potential your product has and what trading results they can achieve from partnering with you. 

  1. Successful examples 

Provide feedback from successful projects or partnerships with other companies.

  1. Price offer

Indicate your terms of cooperation, payment methods and terms, price range for your goods or services, possible markup for wholesale or retail sales, possible selling price, discount for regular customers, etc. 

  1. Project or delivery timeframe

Specify the period over which you expect to achieve the desired result. For example, how long do you want to deliver a certain batch of goods and sell your products in retailers? 

At this step, you can also specify the new stages of the project: manufacturing of goods, delivery of products from your company to the end user. 

  1. Terms and conditions

It is important to specify the legal aspects of cooperation, who is responsible for which processes, and to prescribe the guarantees and obligations of the parties. 

  1. The final part

At the end of the document, you should summarize your commercial offer: the client should clearly understand what they need to do to take advantage of the benefits described.

Be sure to add a call to action. For example, remind the recipient to leave feedback or sign a contract if the RFP is accepted.

  1. Contact information

At the very end of the letter, leave contact details where partners can reach you. This can be an email address, messengers, or phone numbers. 

Tips for creating a commercial offer

In addition to the above requirements for drafting an RFP, also consider other tips that will help make your proposal stand out from the crowd. 

Personalize your offer 

Each commercial offer should be tailored to a specific client. Research the needs and desires of the client to make the offer as relevant as possible. 

Focus on visualization

Use attractive design and structure information in a way that is easy to read. Use headings, subheadings, lists, and tables.

Highlight the benefits

Don't just describe your product or service, but emphasize how it will solve the customer's problems or benefit them.

Provide evidence of success

Include testimonials from satisfied customers, case studies of successful projects, and other evidence of your competence.

Set clear terms of cooperation

Avoid vague wording. Clearly indicate payment terms, deadlines, and other important aspects of cooperation.

Check the document

Check the document for errors and inaccuracies. It's important that the proposal is professionally written and free of errors.

A business proposal is an important element in the process of finding and attracting customers. By following these recommendations, you can create an effective proposal that will increase your chances of business success.


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